Site Review por favor

[cswanson29]

A site that I finished a couple of weeks ago. Any input would be appreciated it. www.streamside-services.com (http://www.streamside-services.com/)

Thanks, guys (& girls).

[matte]

It took me a while to find out what you did. Suggest moving the <h1> text content up higher, or have it in the graphic as well

Look at your text - needs some work!!

Your Customer Focus Rate: 21.43%
You have 3 instances of customer-focused words.
Your Self Focus Rate: 78.57%
You have 5 instances of self-focused words.
You have 6 instances of the Company Name.

You speak about yourself approximately 3 times as often as you speak about your customers.